Hey team at  {Company},

My name is Derek and I recently came to your establishment and loved the experience and wanted to come onto Facebook and leave you a review of how much I enjoyed it. 

After coming onto your page I saw that your social pages have 
{AdditionalInformation} amount of fans and {Notes} amount of engagement. I'm always interested in seeing how business's fan pages compare to the experience I've had in person. I work fulltime in Social media/ SEO (ranking sites in google) so it always interests me who's doing what in different industries. 

That being said I wanted to shoot you through some info on your competition and how your business is doing compared to them, show you their active Facebook fans and show you a few ways you can get on top of them, free of charge because I really think your business should be ahead of them. 

Check out the attached documents of some of your competitors in the area and if you would like any more information on any others shoot them through and I can give you some tips on how to get their fans and customer coming to you. Also if  you want me to give you a 5 star rating on your Facebook page (if they are below 5 stars) let me know I'll get this sorted today. 

Again thank you for the amazing service, I'll be back in very soon, one of the best in the 
{City}.

Sincerely,

Derek S. Frazier 
Longtime customer
Jucebox Digital Marketing Agency