Hey {first_name},

I just wanted to reach out and let you know that I reworked your auto quote and was able to get your insurance down to ${price_quoted_-_auto}/6 mo with the same coverage limits from your online quote. I went ahead and did your home insurance quote and was able to get that at ${price_quoted_-_home}/yr with our full replacement cost policy.  I'd love to go over that with you whenever you're available.

How does that sound?